I wrote 2058 words today while at Starbucks. I am telling you, that Blonde Roast is killer! I shouldn’t do anything before I have a cup of that stuff! I also just realized that my picture for the Josh post is of a young woman smiling. That’s because Josh made Libby smiling- not because Josh is a young girl. Though, that would be very interesting as well. I’m on my first draft so we’ll see how thigns turn out during the editing phase.
I color coded my index cards list night and realized that I’ve been having so much trouble with identifying the A plot line because I didn’t really have one. Libby hasn’t been doing much so far except responding and reacting to the actions of others. For the rest of this week and next my writing focus will be on Libby’s actions.
this excerpt is from a scene where Libby is at a salon with her grandmother. Its at this salon where she will have the idea of finding different ways to cure her blindness. That is her A plot- hunting for a cure to her blindness that doesn’t involve science and allows her to have the life she’s always dreamed of. That’s all she wants: the life she thinks she was promised because of her faithfulness and her dreams. Oh, Libby, if life was only that simple.
The wail of the blowdryer in my ear as she pulled the circular brush through my wet curls made eavesdropping nearly impossible. While Adel worked on the right side of my head, out of my left ear I vaguely heard the words blind, six months. My curiosity switched to from the women speaking foreign languages to Grandmother’s conversation with Adel. My ears were definitely burning and not from the heat of the blowdryer.
I strained to hear more of their conversation, clenching my teeth and offering Manuel a closed mouth smile as he ran the nail file along my nails. His eyes moved hungrily from their conversation to me. My frustration boiled over whenI heard the word “shame”.
“Gran!” I turned in my seat to face her next to me. Adel and the other stylist went still, their hands stopped and holding their instruments in mid air. “Why are you telling everyone about me?”
She took a deep breath and let it out slowly. “Sweetheart,” she said, and everyone seemed to relax. “I’m not ‘telling everyone about you’. I am simply sharing with close friends my concerns for you.” Adel smiled and the other two did the same.
“You shouldn’t have to go through this alone,” Adel cooed, placing her manicured hands on my shoulders. I caught her eyes in the mirror and the look on her face was one of genuine sincerity. “A girl without a mother needs a community.”
I looked away from her quickly. I held back my inclination to shout, “I don’t need a mother or a community” but then I remembered that I needed someone to pay for this hair treatment and my manicure, so I should keep my mouth shut and let Gran talk about whatever she wanted.
“Is there some sort of treatment for this,” Gran’s young stylist waved her hands around trying to conjur from midair the word she forgot.
“Treatment?” The girl nodded happily at the word. “Yes,” I said,
“So, what are you doing to do about it? When do these treat start?” She asked. looking away from her and all of them. Its hard to avoid people’s eyes when there are mirrors everywhere you look. I stared a tile on the floor.
“Leisl!” Adel reached out and sharply flicked her on the shoulder with the brush. Liesl rubbed her arm where the brush made contact and went back to hot curling Gran’s hair.
“We’re hoping for a more spiritual approach to treatment,” Gran interjected.
A chorus of “Oh’s” came from the women, even the ones under the dyers who looked as if they weren’t paying attention to the conversation. Adel snapped a look over her shoulder that sent the women back behind their magazines.
“That’s good,” she said, patting me on the shoulder. I smiled up at her. If I fake it, maybe one day I’ll believe it. She spritzed my hair with liquid from spray bottle then rubbed a serum in my hair that gave it a shine and softness that I could never achieve on my own.
Just as she clicked on the blowdryer, I said, “I wish there was some sort of magic serum you could rub on my eyes to make them go right.” I added a chuckle to my voice and a smile to face to show that their concern hadn’t gone unappreciated.
“No need for magic, dear. The Lord’s got this one,” Gran said. Just as she began to settle into reading her magazine, I looked in the mirror a mysterious glance between Adel and Leisl look.